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Lumina
Seven Fallen Stars

Prologue

The night was calm and cool that day when they arrived onto our planet, our town.
It wasn’t frightening or pleasant to observe something so beautiful fall from the sky.
The night of New Years Eve brought us an amazing show:
A shoot star was heading straight forward for our town.
It sparkled in colors that showed rage and pain as it headed straight forth to us.
As if there were a fight going on up on the star, but the people on it are not noticing that they’re going to crash in just a few seconds.
All what my people here in Talisa could do was watch, panic or enjoy their last show.
As I gazed at this incident, all of what I can think of was ‘Pretty’ or ‘Shiny’
Then, the division of the star took place.

As the enormous star was about to take land, it formed apart.
Split, broke off, or anything else that means separated.
Seven little stars were now to be seen:
Three on the right, three on the left and one in the middle of them all.
The one big star turned to be just seven stars combined together.
Now they are separated, the raging one star turned into a different color.
The seven stars now look blue and white; calm and relieved.
As if the fight they had just ended and they all want a break.
My people, bewildered by this bizarre action, took off their worries and watched another sequence.

The stars shot out in different directions; all but the middle one.
The top right went forth to the North of the artic plains
The middle right flew to the North-west to a calm land
The bottom right blazed off to the West, where the rocky mountains are
The top left soar off away to the East of the smaller region lands
The middle left dashed away South-east where No man’s land was located
And the bottom left dove toward the South where the hot, burning lands are found
The middle one though, decided to stick around.

Now the six stars are gone
As if they decided to call off their match and rearrange it another day
The sky was darker now with just the single blue star coming down.
Though it was still heading straight for our town, I didn’t mind.
In fact, I was glad it came down.

For now, I have a purpose to explore
A purpose to discover what this is.
I have found my new interest that will help me find my way again.
I have found you, the fallen star, Lumina
And with that, the star made its entrance…

-Evelyn, Amy
1/1/xx
©2007-2009 ~WonderingSoul4311
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Author's Comments

Hmm, yes. Finally I do something an post up the prologue to a story that I'm ACTUALLY going to do >_< Well, truthfully I wanted to post something other then this because I really just wanted this idea to go out and lose my interest but...I got into it XD

So, well if anyone DO care enough, I'll be concentrating my stories on this one...Maybe come artist can, oh I don't know...give a hand with some reference sheets to my character? :3...Nah, just kidding...ish

Well, enjoy for now if your interested!

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:iconfashionably-late:
Quite interesting so far. I can't wait to see how this will develop. <B

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Watch your nose!
:iconwonderingsoul4311:
Mmm, thanks :3 I'm really glad this got someone's attention ^_^
:iconsuperdemon-inuyasha:
*.* Oooo cool! ^-^ hehe awesome job on this!

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~Inuyasha is all fine and all mine! 8D
~"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!"
~I HATE Non-canon Yaoi/yuri :banned: :fork: (See my stamps about this!)
~I’m part of the 50% of DA’s Anime fanbase who isn’t a yaoi fan 8D
:iconfashionably-late:
lol. Me too. =D

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Watch your nose!
:iconmiharu-xvi:
Wow, that's interesting! So you're going to make a story. And you'll make a manga with it or a novel?

I asume this will be totally different from Rina's story, right?
:iconwonderingsoul4311:
Rina is...total gone >< I've completely left her out of any story now; she's unfortunately but a memory.

Lumina too...I put this up a long time ago, and the idea just kind of slipped out or my brain. I've created many story ideas but I lost my ability to draw anymore...So I've been trying my best to type them, but at the same time my busy-ness with school and laziness after school kicks in everyday. I have a lot of artistic friends that loves my stories and offers to draw some of them but they've been lying to me here and there... I really have no friends down here anymore ^^; I can try my best to somehow get a story going though; I love my idea for Lumina and I feel really bad for leaving Rina out of any of my other stories. Time changes things I guess...
:iconmiharu-xvi:
Ah, don't worry, it's pretty normal to come up with a new story and leave the others in the past.

But, I really can't believe you lost your artistic skills! I need proof XD Hm.. Maybe if you practice drawing again? After some time you may be able to get your ability back. Or you just don't wanna draw anymore? :0

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